【中文表达】如图所示，黑暗中有一盏小小的油灯，它向周围散发着光亮。

　　【英文表达】As is shown in the cartoon, in the darkness happily stands a candle. It spreads brightness around itself.

　　【改善表达】As is shown in the cartoon, in the darkness happily stands a candle, spreading brightness around itself.

　　【闪光表达】

　　Just as an old Arab proverb says, love is just like light, being brighter in the darker places.

　　正如一句阿拉伯谚语所说，爱像一盏灯，在越黑暗的地方就越明亮。

　　Just as an old Arab proverb says, where there is love, there is hope.

　　正如一句阿拉伯谚语所说，有爱的地方就有希望。

　　An American girl in traditional Chinese costume

　　【中文表达】照片中央站着一位美丽的美国女孩, 她穿着传统的中国服饰, 佩戴着各种各样的饰物, 脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。

　　【英文表达】As is vividly shown in the photo, in the sunshine stands a pretty American girl, (who is ) in Chinese traditional clothes, wearing necklace and its like, with a sweet smile on her face.

摘自：《2013考研英语写作高分攻略》