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2011年6月18日四级考试作文真题标准版范文

 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

  1. 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚

  2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题

  3. 我的建议

  Online Shopping

  Lets look around. The modern world is increasingly populated by online shopping. And online shopping has become a fashion. The number of online customers has jumped to almost 30 million. Besides, online shopping has given birth to a whole industry. For example, TaoBao, Alibaba and other online shopping companies have accounted for up to three-fifths of the domestic retail market.

  However, everything always has pros and cons, including online shopping. On one hand, online shopping has countless advantages. For instance, it makes shopping convenient for us. We can buy almost all commodities at home. And all we need to do is clicking the mouse. On the other hand, online shopping has some disadvantages such as online deception. A few months ago, the deception event in Alibaba Group has made waves in the world of online shopping.

  In my opinion, as the Net grows, online shopping is becoming growingly influential and inevitable. Therefore, we should take some effective measures to develop its good points and overcome its shortcomings. For one thing, we should energetically promote the development of online shopping. For another, we should enhance the online shopping supervision. Only in this way, can online shopping make a splash.

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