六级作文: 1. 目前高校排名相当盛行
2. 对于这种做法,人们看法不一
3. 我认为……
It is a not-uncommon social phenomenon that the university rankings are especially prevalent in our country. For example, universities are measured by scale, academic achievements or the number of papers published in famous magazines.
As to this issue, opinions vary from person to person. Some people hold that university ranking dramatically promotes the development of university in various fields. But others maintain that university ranking also leads to some undesirable consequences such as academic fraud even to deceive people.
As far I am concerned, every coin has two sides. On one hand, University ranking does encourage the development and growth of colleges. Such growth– the grand libraries, splendid stadiums and fruitful academic achievements, has caught the attention of the world. We’re impressed by these signs of our education’s tour to the 21st century.
On the other hand, we have to pay attention to an unexpected phenomenon that some people have ignored the objectivity of university ranking. Take South university of science and technology of china for an example, this university occupies the second position in some university rankings. In those rankings, it is superior to Peking University and Tsinghua university. In a word, we should inspire the advantages of university and abandon its disadvantages.
一、内容
“高校排名”应当是现在很热的一个话题。在网络上大家会看到数以千计的排名表,不同的衡量标准,五花八门。同一所高校在这个名单里是第2,可能在别的排名里连边也沾不上。这种高校排名的情况会否衍生出一个新的“百度竞价”呢?谁也说不准。
这种热点问题的选取,其实正是四六级命题组的最大原则“反映当前社会的具有普遍意义和教育意义的现象”。
通过这几次的CET作文题的命题情况,文都徐可风坚持认为,明年CET的作文命题仍旧会坚持以上原则。
二、范文
这次文都徐可风提供的参考范文从结构和内容上来说符合题目提纲要求,而且内容充实,且使用到多种论证方法。
在表达方面,用词既选择了基础的常用词汇,同时也有意识地使用了较高级的词汇。例如第一段的not-uncommon,prevalent ,undesirable , fraud等。在句型结构方面,采取简单句与复合句的间隔使用,句型多样,例如状语从句,同位语从句等。
(文都徐可风)