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作文一直可以说是考试的重难点,也是让考生最头疼的内容,作文除了需要我们有一定的词汇积累,也需要我们不间断的练习和总结,练习多了才能熟能生巧,才能下笔成章,下面来一起练习一下这篇英语四级作文吧,希望考生能够更好地为12月份的四六级考试提前做好准备。
Learning: a Lifelong Career
As food is to the body, so is learning to the mind.①Our bodies grow and muscles develop with the intake of adequate nutritious food. Likewise, we should keep learning day by day to maintain our keen mental power and expand our intellectual capacity. Constant learning supplies us with inexhaustible fuel for driving us to sharpen our power of reasoning, analysis, and judgment.② Learning incessantly is the surest way to keep pace with the times in the information age, and reliable warrant of success in times of uncertainty.
Once learning stops, vegetation sets in. It is a common fallacy to regard school as the only workshop for the acquisition of knowledge. On the contrary, learning should be a never ending process, from the cradle to the grave. With the world changing so fast, to cease learning for just a few days will make a person lag behind. What’ s worse, the animal instinct dormant deep in our sub-conscious will come to life, weakening our will to pursue our noble ideas, undermining our determination to sweep away obstacles to our success and strangling our desire for the refinement of our character. Lack of learning will inevitably lead to the stagnation of the mind, or even worse, its fossilization.③ Therefore, to stay mentally young, we have to take learning as a lifelong career.
作文点评
本文首先从正面论证主题,首句点题,并通过对首句的解释进一步说明终生学习的意义。之后作者结合时代变化的特征,用the surest way以及reliable warrant说明了持续学习的现实意义。第二段作者从反面来论证自己的观点,说明停止学习会导致的严重后果。最后用therefore引出全文的结束语,再次重申观点,并与文章题目相呼应。
本文开篇引用As...is to..., so is... to... 的经典句型开门见山,将学习对心智的重要性比作食物对身体的重要性,生动形象。行文流畅,并能结合时代特征;首尾呼应,画龙点睛。
重点词汇
inexhaustible a. 无穷无尽的
incessantly ad. 不断地,不停地
warrant n. 授权令,(正当)理由,根据;vt. 证明…是正当的
fallacy n.谬误,谬论
cradle n. 摇篮,发源地
dormant a. 蛰伏的,休止的,匿名的
undermine vt. 暗中破坏,逐渐削弱;侵蚀…的基础
strangle v. 扼杀,抑制,压制
stagnation n. 停滞
fossilize vt. 使成化石,使陈腐