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  在大学英语六级考试中,写作部分是不是会另很多同学头疼。不知如何下笔,写出来之后也不知道自己写的怎么样。为了让同学有更加清晰地写作思路,下面为为大家距离点评作文,希望能帮助到同学们。

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write acomposition of no less than 150 words on the topic “Whether CollegeStudents Should Be Allowed to Get Married” and you’re your article onthe following outline.

  1. Choose either of the two positions: College students should (not) be allowed to get married.

  2. State your reasons for or against the issue

  3. Conclusion

  Should College Students Be Allowed to Get Married?

  There isno denying the fact that it is a hotly debated topic today whethercollege students should be allowed to get married. Some time ago, theban was lifted by some universities on students getting married. Tothis people’s attitudes differ sharply. Some hold the positive view.They say that most college students are adults and that it is a basicright for those who have reached the appropriate ages to get married.Besides, they argue that with their biological and emotional needs met,these students will study better. The ban on this means a severeviolation of human rights.

  Many others, however, hold the negative opposite view. Theyclaim that the university or college is a place to study instead of acommunity to lead family life. Allowing college students to get marriedwould adversely affect their study. For instance, they would spend toomuch time attending their family and love, unable to concentrate ontheir school work.

  As far as I am concerned, Weighing the arguments of both sides, I believe that it is OK to allow college students to get married. Anyway,this is their freedom. Actually, we don’t have to worry too muchbecause facts have shown that most college students would choose not toget married in the face of such fierce competition and heavy schoolwork.

  (或 As far as I am concerned, Weighing the arguments of both sides,I believe that college students should not be allowed to get married.Though mostly adults, they are actually immature psychologically. Theirwishes to get married are, more often than not, impulses. Besides, asstudents, they are not ready to support a family financially.


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